Anyone got a minute to look over this query letter I've reworked for Djinnocide? I don't want to send it to a group site for crit. I just need to know if I've headed in the right direction with this damn thing and I'm too close to see it.
Cuz, like, I hate it and every previous incarnation of it. Hate it with the flame of a thousand rugburns.
Let me know either in comments or via email. (If you've already read the book, that would be a big plus, but if not, you can at least tell me if the letter makes you want to read it.)