As much as I hate to admit it, her snotty comments do occasionally turn out to be right. Something was off with the flow, and the writing felt stilted, and... let's just say this is the reason I keep her around.
Anyway, I tackled Chapter Five - determined to fix it once and for all. Within moments, everything was falling into place. Huzzah! Take that you snooty French trollop.
"You sheet. Ah steell theenk you're a hack. Go ahead, spend your day wasteeng time on your seelee storees. Ah have shoppeeng to do."
Have any huzzah moments lately? How are things in your world?