:cue tightrope music:
With tomorrow fast approaching - a little too fast, if you ask me - we come to the ninth and final pitfall of the year...
NaNo Pitfall #9 - The Fine Line
Sure, you've written loads of words. Hopefully they've worked together and made a somewhat cogent story with coherent characters. All this time you've been creating, though, you've been walking a fine line between needing to get x-number of words on paper and making those words work as a logical story.
Maybe you plotted the story out ahead of time. If you did, you probably don't need to read this post. Your word count and your storyline are probably running parallel. Congratulations.
Me? I rarely plot out anything. Therefore, the fine line I walk sometimes isn't any thicker than frog's hair. I'm sure when I look back over those scenes, I'll be asking myself "What the hell were you thinking here?" Sometimes I'll be able to figure it out. Other times I'll read a scene and never be able to discern what I was going for. (Here's hoping this book has more of the former than the latter, eh?)
Why is this a pitfall? Because as we reach the final words for NaNo and thus the final scenes for our books, we need to be able to remember all those threads we created over the past month and weave them to their natural conclusion. And that, my friends, can totally stop you in your tracks.
Hence, the Pitfall. See? I knew I'd wrap it together somehow...
As I was laying in bed last night, once again battling my subconsious for some snooze-time, my brain was racing through all the threads. With only a few thousand words left, am I absolutely sure I wrapped up the thread about Nigel? Am I bringing the whole thing with the dog to a logical conclusion? Is the dastardly killer getting what he deserves or should I insert another twist that will carry through to the subsequent books in the series? And what about that weirdo being who crept into the fight scene? Did I really introduce a hint of romance, and what the hell am I going to do about THAT?
Needless to say, my brain was on overdrive and I woke up this morning not knowing what the hell to do with the next few scenes. I could wrap it all up with a pretty bow for now and fix it later. On the other hand, I could write a dozen more scenes to explain... Bleh, I hate reading pages of things the writer should've already explained. Or, I could stop what I'm doing and go back - rereading and editing until I can finish the end.
See? This could conceivably stop me in my tracks inches from the finish line. Will it? Nah. I'm just using myself as an example. If this is happening to you, though, you might not be able to get past this Pitfall without a litte nudge. Here's what I'm going to do.
Take the bit in my teeth and run like hell.
Probably not the advice you were expecting. Definitely not the best advice for writing the end of your story any other time of the year. This is NaNo, though. Right now, thinking about loose ends is only going to stall your progress.
Am I advocating writing 5000 words of nonsense?? Certainly not. I mean, it's still going to be part of your story. What I'm saying is, get the words out and worry about tying it all up later. That's what editing is for. So what if I introduced some threads five chapters ago that I now realized I never fully finished? I'll catch when I sit down to edit.
Sorry if this wasn't the post you were expecting. I didn't edit this any more than I'm editing my work right now. Plus, my brain is the equivalent of pumpkin puree. Maybe soon I'll write a post on the mush my brain turns into after writing so many words in one month.
Have a great day, everyone. Tune in tomorrow for what I hope will be a less meandering post.
On a project like Nano, that requires a fixed amount of words in a limited amount of time, I think you should push forward without editing. However, in a normal situation, I couldn't write an entire novel without revising it.
ReplyDeleteSome authors at a writer's conference I recently attended, would argue that editing as you go stifles the creative process. This is good in theory, but given my "Type A" personality, I cannot imagine having to correct four-hundred pages of jumbled, senseless text. I'd chuck the manuscript before taking on such a mess.
Instead, I find it easier to edit at the end of each chapter. Also, if I have moved forward in my book and have an idea that will contribute to a previous chapter,then I immediately go back and make the changes.
Don't get me wrong, I realize that I will still have to rework and rewrite my manuscript upon completing it. But I'm hoping that the pages will make sense and have some structure. Best Wishes on your writing project.